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They’ll say you had a full life.

They’ll talk about how you were a good kid on the farm,
And how you told us one mischievous story after the other:
Like throwing apples at the wasp nest near your father,
Or trying to make dynamite in the basement.

They’ll talk about your strong, religious convictions,
Your love of gospel music and live concerts,
And the deep, abiding friendship you had with my father
Kept vital to the bitter end.

They’ll talk about your work on the railroad,
The long hours spent away from home and family,
Your uncompromising demand for safety in the shops,
The way you hired the inspector away from OSHA.

You stood up to mob bosses
And you stood up to this goddamned disease,
Until it left you both bloated and withered
And the lucid moments became fewer
And empty look in your eyes absolutely crushed us.

I’ll remember that Christmas was the last time
That you tugged my long braid
To tell me you loved me
As if the words weren’t enough.

Rest now.
You've earned it.
09-17-36 to 04-30-09


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:icon1noah2:
the picture is great but when you read the comments it moves you...
:iconpickyme:
:hug:~

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I am the type of girl that when my feet hit the floor in the morning the devil shakes and says, " Oh Shit she is awake! " :) Avi made by [link]
:iconnikashainiquitous:
Thank you. I still cannot read it through without crying.

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Have you visited AUTUMN COUNTRY yet? :meditate:
:iconscarlettletters:
You need to make this a full blown piece of visual poetry. It is brilliant...I loved this the first time you posted it.

I’ll remember that Christmas was the last time
That you tugged my long braid
To tell me you loved me
As if the words weren’t enough.

That part is haunting and lovely.

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"To really ask is to open the door to the whirlwind. The answer may annihilate the question and the questioner." - Lestat
:iconnikashainiquitous:
Thank you so much. Perhaps when I've had a bit more time. It's too raw right now.

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Have you visited AUTUMN COUNTRY yet? :meditate:
:iconnikashainiquitous:
Thanks.

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Have you visited AUTUMN COUNTRY yet? :meditate:

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